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hey_sephia
24 April 2004 at 4:30pm

Ini cerita pertamaku, semoga pada suka. Kalau sudah selesai baca, tolong tinggalkan pesan dengan menulis di Comments. Komentar apapun (caci maki sekalipun) sangat diharapkan.

Rating: PG (Parental Guidance) / BO (Bimbingan Orangtua) :D
Just in case..

Author hey_sephia
Finished Yes
Total rating rating_0

Chapters

1 Chapter 1
hey_sephia 24 April 2004 at 4:32pm
2 Chapter 2
hey_sephia 28 April 2004 at 3:46am
3 Chapter 3
hey_sephia 30 April 2004 at 3:28am
4 Chapter 4
hey_sephia 3 May 2004 at 5:10pm
5 Chapter 5
hey_sephia 7 May 2004 at 2:54am
6 Chapter 6
hey_sephia 9 May 2004 at 3:02pm
7 Chapter 7
hey_sephia 14 May 2004 at 3:21am
8 Sequel 1
hey_sephia 20 May 2004 at 4:05am
9 Sequel 2
hey_sephia 22 May 2005 at 7:24pm
10 Sequel 3
hey_sephia 29 May 2005 at 5:19pm
11 Sequel 4
hey_sephia 6 June 2005 at 6:16pm
12 Sequel 5
hey_sephia 7 June 2005 at 7:53pm
13 Sequel 6
hey_sephia 14 June 2005 at 4:30pm
14 Sequel 7
hey_sephia 21 June 2005 at 2:31pm
15 Sequel 8
hey_sephia 6 July 2005 at 4:42am
16 Sequel 9 (Tamat)
hey_sephia 9 July 2005 at 5:06pm

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#31
Thor 11 July 2005 at 11:36am  

Momon akhir yang sama sekali tidak dapat ditebak :D. :bow2::bow2::bow2::bow::bow::bow::bow:

Unsur kejutan yang sangat gua suka :D. BTW ini cuma usul mon, kayaknya kalo Pandu lebih dilibatkan dalam klimaks akhir lebih seru deh :D. Terus konflik batin Niken antara benci dan suka dengan Dion harus lebih digali lagi :D. Pertentangan batin seperti itu bagus untuk ditonjolkan :D.

So untuk sequel mata elang gua kasih rating (4).

Dan tetap berkreasi Mon. Ditunggu lho karya selanjutnya. Tidak harus lanjutan Mta Elang, bikin cerita baru juga ok kok mon :D.
#32
yinyeksin 11 July 2005 at 2:37pm  

abis juga deh ceritanya :p endingnya ok mon, seperti yang diperkirakan hehehe...cuman unsur suprised dari Sadu yang bener2 unpredictable :p good story!!!
#33 avatar
ridzwan 24 March 2009 at 6:41pm  

bagus bgnat deh
#34 avatar
tedi 22 March at 1:17pm  

alur ceritanya mantap bos...mengharu biru.....lanjutakan bos....
#35 avatar
Garth 22 March at 5:52pm  

Until chapter 3.. SUPERB :o

Will continue tomorrow, TY! :)