ahhh...try to make different plot with the 1st one??? ceritanya menarik nih keep working!!!

Dud d'u know samtin'? Even we laik fait. Bat we prefer sword to us. So if u use revolver or other fire gun, we'll absolutely looze. Then what fun left! See u

Coa heng please forgive my foolishness. Actually I can't make such ur good books. I just remember what old shatterhand said to mr henry'You're brilliant with your discovery and thousand indian will death in your hands' thats all

Nice try. Amazing how even your accent shows up in writing.

Keep trying though.