to pahlawan......

ceritanya bagus.... kritik gw cuma satu....
kalo mau pake hanyu pinyin.... konsisten donk.... jangan ngerusak sistem....
lau = tua , supposed to be lao....
trus gak ada tuh kata 'lek',
shi ti = adik seperguruan, supposed to be shi di
banyak lagi yg gw nemu.....
kalo mo pake ala taiwan (romanisasi seperti bunyinya aja) yo monggo..... silahkan.....
asal jg dicampur aduk antara hanyu pinyin ama taiwanese yah... apalagi pake cara dicampur hokianese (zhang wu ji jadi tio bu ki gethu........)

ok, that's all ... keep writing yah.....
go u go